An Exercise from the Novel "Cue for Treason"

I decided to substitute Peter Brownrigg for a character I know very well, Harry Potter. I have read the Harry Potter book collection; therefore, I know his character in detail. The story would have been different in many ways with Harry Potter because of his differences with Peter Brownrigg. In the first place, the whole story would not have occurred since Harry Potter would have done his job right when keeping watch. Harry Potter is a big observer so he would have been more careful. He would have reacted sooner to Sir Philip Morton arriving. …