Different Views of Success in Rap Culture," is a comparison paper that has much room to be improved grammatically, and needs to be better centered on the thesis. The paper compared the different views of success in rap music culture that are portrayed in the songs "Juicy" by Notorious B.I.G., and "The Way I Am" by Eminem. The essay was consistently polluted with information irrelevant to the thesis, thus distracting readers from the main point, which made the argument of the author incredibly weaker. …
